*This may not be much of value to you, but it does contain facts about my writing style, and my certain desire to step-out in a unique way to expand my knowledge on this very subject*
It has come to my
concern that almost every essay of mine begins with the consult of a background
behind the particular topic. I don’t see how I won’t be doing the same this
time, but I have to keep in mind a critical approach to whatever I write, as it
will voluntary convey to a reader who probably doesn’t have a clue of my
writing style. By my description of my covert habits which may include an
astounding amount of positive and negative comments, the reader could moodily
conclude on their opinion on how most of my essays go and whether they shall
continue to long for more variations from me. From the time I first learned the
alphabets till now, I have progressed a lot in terms of my literal work which
may include many of the essays which have been written for the sake of school
work, or as a hobby to pass time. To relocate and proclaim the respect for my
text I have come up with different ways to influence my audience (mainly the
teacher) to feel for what I had written through the use of the well known
literacy devices in order to offer an ideal polished essay. I personally see
myself as an ideal writer for an individual of my age, but yet again, who am I
to judge.
I would like to
introduce a character named Jordan to talk about why parts of my essays are
considered to obey the laws of literature. By parts I mean, he’ll be talking
about all the best elements which make these essays worth reading. His
appearance won’t matter much to you, ah who am I kidding? It most probably
will. He looks just like me, when I’m all ready to go to a party. The clean me.
Jordan is…
Ahem (Jordan clears his
throats), I must take over from here now. No time for any introduction for
myself as I have a task to complete and I wouldn’t like to entertain you with
the boredom of my inexistent life. I love reading essays or any kind of literacy
work and my only hobby is also based on them. I like finding out the best an
author could provide from an essay. Ramandeep, just like any other human being
who has written an essay for an audience, indulges in following a trend which
comprises the youth to follow the techniques of famous writers, or a teachers’
guide in order to assemble an essay in a way to form a good structure. His use
of characters to support an appealing storyline is greatly executed and he uses
dialogues to keep a smooth flow of events dismissing the content to the
audience. He conveniently completes his essay in honor of the restriction, such as
the word limit provided. He has a sense of how the whole essay should be
depending on his theme and does do a good enough job to satisfy not only
himself but the reader too who has an exact idea of the topic Ramandeep speaks
about. He ideally controls his vocabulary and grammar in accordance to what the
reader would expect, and I appreciate that the most. He handles both the active
and passive voices in a smooth way. His sense of where he is heading in his
essay does suggest that he is pretty much aware of the mistakes he makes and
does his best to avoid them. He often
prefers the genre type of science fictions or dramatic or even sports as he
implies to use other resources in order to provide a presentable essay which remarkably
justifies the storyline based on that theme. The tone is varying throughout the
essay many a time, as he prefers using multiple tones to resemble the
seriousness for each event. I wish I had more polite words or more good to talk
about, but I guess I just can’t make up my own fictional compliments for
Ramandeep. I would like to hand over the narrative authority back to the main
subject here.
Hi, it’s me again! It’s
good to know what best attributes I represent in the way of my writing. Jordan
has somewhat made me sentimental, and I must agree with all the good he found
from my essays. But I must be neutral here, even if this whole essay has a purpose
based to evaluate my deeds for writing, and I am an author for this too, I must
try and avoid being biased. Suzzane is a colleague of Jordan’s and quite
surprisingly has the opposite appearance and approach towards any written
passage. Let’s just say that she looks like the untidy me, messed up in every
sense including her clothing filled with stains all over. She is eagerly
waiting to take over some space to justify some of her points emerged on the
basis of her opinions and criticisms towards my writing style.
Hi, I’m Suzzane. I have this soft side
of me which is truly dedicated for reading and reading only. As much as I love
reading essays I can’t stop criticizing and pointing out the faults in what I
read. It’s a problem I have and I hope it does help the author improve for a
better future in whatever he writes. Let’s not get too
carried away. I am going to be completely straightforward.
When I first read an essay on dreams by
Ramandeep, I was immensely confused on where the story was heading to. I feel
like he doesn’t seem to have the control to construct his essays to prolong its
way in a flow. It’s just not his control which worries me, but his inability to
sometimes begin with new paragraphs, as many of his essays are very compressed,
which of course doesn’t leave a good impression on the reader. He struggles in
comprehending the proper use of FOS’s in his essays, mainly because he doesn’t
seem to have an idea on where and when to place that particular sentence
containing one of the FOS. He struggles with metaphors, similes, and in his
effort for writing a sarcastic comment, or statement. His handwriting is
something which I would recommend him to work on.
Those were some truly harsh but honest
statements that Suzzane made. Jordan and Suzzane both were just two characters,
and though they may not be considered any worth outside this text, but they did
a great job in saving me a great deal of time by judging something which I
never could do. In order to compliment their opinions I would try to adjust
some new techniques to fit the lot of a genuine writer.
In the most recent project of mine, where I
wrote a short story about an apocalypse, I tried to minimize the pathos side of
it, and considered to give more importance in the verse of a proper storyline.
Emotions were still high, but with that I wanted to be logically accurate in
the sense of a science fiction story. I usually like to read novels which are
based on teen life, or which comprise genres like romantic, comedic, sports,
science fiction, or even factual sciences. It has got me thinking to do
something different, to try out different genres, as this way I will be well
versed to write an essay of completely different topics. I would like to shift
gears and experiment with genres when I have been given a task to write. I
would do this to prove to the reader or my teacher my ability to adapt to
changes. I would like to harmonize the
style of my essay by increasing my knowledge spectrum when it comes to the type
of words I select. I must learn from the mistakes I’ve made, and try to make
amendments so that I may not repeat them in the approaching future. I would
continue following the positive remarks I’ve got from Jordan and try to completely
shock Suzzane by diminishing all the negative virtues. I would set a goal, stay
determined, and attain the goal.
Regards from the very own, Ramandeep Singh.
R.S.
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